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These words are the first in awhile and they are hopefully the beginning of more to come soon. Let me know what you think.

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:icondelosomp:
There is relief at dawn. :nod:
I used to have a sever case of insomnia for 6 months in monterey, california. Something about living on the edge of the continent made me feel like I could run no further unless I wished to drown in the unforgiving sea. I rarely slept. I hated the night and sighed at dawn.

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:iconemeowrald:
It looks like a begining in more ways than one.

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I'm a fluffy green kitty.
:iconfrazzled-mage:
yes I do hope so indeed ;)

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please stop by sometime :gallery:

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youarerighthereyouhavetakenthespaceoutofmywords
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Dawn is good because it begins with DA ;P yes I am happy when I make to the morning each and every day. Glad to see you sleep a little better now!

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youarerighthereyouhavetakenthespaceoutofmywords
:iconblueskye27:
Pretty. Hope it's the first of many.
:iconalecbell:
Very keenly balanced. The darkness interests me, as does the notion of the dawning of salvation.

I have the feeling that this frail bridge of verse traverses a mighty chasm of subtext.

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconfrazzled-mage:
Me too! and thank you.

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youarerighthereyouhavetakenthespaceoutofmywords
:icontamacatori:
Am I seeing a sign of hope for you? I feel the anticipation in this haiku, it's definitely there my friend. I like the way you string your words together, few but very powerful. :hug:

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:butterfly:What the heart has once owned and had, it shall never lose.:butterfly:

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