A darkness never
To pass, yet my salvation
finally has dawned.
A darkness never To pass, yet my salvation finally has dawned. |
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There is relief at dawn.
I used to have a sever case of insomnia for 6 months in monterey, california. Something about living on the edge of the continent made me feel like I could run no further unless I wished to drown in the unforgiving sea. I rarely slept. I hated the night and sighed at dawn. -- yes I do hope so indeed
-- please stop by sometime [link] youarerighthereyouhavetakenthespaceoutofmywords Dawn is good because it begins with DA
-- please stop by sometime [link] youarerighthereyouhavetakenthespaceoutofmywords Very keenly balanced. The darkness interests me, as does the notion of the dawning of salvation.
I have the feeling that this frail bridge of verse traverses a mighty chasm of subtext. -- There's always a better poem just out of reach. Words create situations [link] The roots of the future run deep [link] Me too! and thank you.
-- please stop by sometime [link] youarerighthereyouhavetakenthespaceoutofmywords |
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