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Bumblebee by ~frazzled-mage:iconfrazzled-mage:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Humor > Haiku & Eastern


Bumblebee- you fly
Because you also failed your
College physics class.
©2007-2009 ~frazzled-mage
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See there is this Muse, you see
Whose thoughts get the best of me
Bringing out my silly side
To take it out for a ride.
It would not be planned
'Cept we'd walk it hand in hand.

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~chattycat28 Dec 13, 2007, 6:20:33 PM
I find your poem and comment both to be a delight. I like your silly side, and that Muse of yours; you should buy her something pretty for all of the overtime.
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~frazzled-mage Dec 13, 2007, 6:26:57 PM
I am sure that I have no idea what you mean about a silly side....I am such a serious gent. My Muse should be given the world, but as of yet it is still full price and she also told me never to pay retail....

Let it not be said that I do not listen to my Muse. ;P

jfk

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~Satah Dec 13, 2007, 9:34:37 PM
If you never let your silly side play
or walk it almost every day,
there might be a time-- there very well may--
when it will simply run away
(a tragedy for which you will dearly pay
if a joke is ever tossed your way).

I just loved this simple piece
more than a gosling loves other geese.
It's my hope that you won't cease
and let your silliness become deceased,
because there would be a sharp decrease
in the puns you tend to guiltily release.

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
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~Satah Dec 13, 2007, 9:35:01 PM
ps.: REALLY like this~

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
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~frazzled-mage Dec 13, 2007, 10:27:30 PM
Oh the poem to my poem with its silly sidebar. :clap: :dance: :boogie: You have made this particular moment(which I thought might be sad for me) so wonderful!...

THANK YOU SATAH :worship: best rhyming comment ever for me.

And I will never let it go away
As long as Satah's silly side can come out and play.

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~Satah Dec 14, 2007, 6:57:20 AM
No problem~ I think that at least ninety percent of conversations would be improved by speaking in rhyme. :B

My silly side is permanent.
I've pretty much determined this.
I'm not even the one in control--
my silly side owns my soul.

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
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~MisfitsChibis Dec 14, 2007, 8:52:24 AM
Thats awsome! *claps hands*

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I support sticking my hands into Auto's Dual Cupholders :heart:! :typerhappy:
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~frazzled-mage Dec 14, 2007, 5:34:14 PM
:clap: :clap: :clap: Bravo!!!

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~frazzled-mage Dec 14, 2007, 5:39:06 PM
Thank you so much! And thanks for the :+fav: I appreciated it greatly.

jfk

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